tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post5108345198452232813..comments2023-06-03T20:02:33.230+08:00Comments on Just Bystanding: I Fail to See the Heavenskelvin s.m.http://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-64065223393831626212015-08-08T13:48:47.701+08:002015-08-08T13:48:47.701+08:00Blogging is the new poetry. I find it wonderful an...Blogging is the new poetry. I find it wonderful and amazing in many ways.<br />Mobile App Developershttp://defuzed.innoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-84591420208947908562015-06-23T03:20:19.260+08:002015-06-23T03:20:19.260+08:00Effectively chosen words....produce the shocking e...Effectively chosen words....produce the shocking effect....humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-28945097934369205692015-06-23T00:08:28.929+08:002015-06-23T00:08:28.929+08:00All eyes on you can sometimes make you feel suffoc...All eyes on you can sometimes make you feel suffocated with only one way out. Too sad to think hell is the only way. But often times we must go through hell in order to find heaven. Thanks for sharing, Kelvin. This is a brilliant write :)Toriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10570179609915990220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-33968638855748099842015-06-22T21:39:32.099+08:002015-06-22T21:39:32.099+08:00Ah but heaven exists Kevin. Luv how well you craft...Ah but heaven exists Kevin. Luv how well you crafted after the Emily blueprint<br />Thanks for dropping by my Sunday Lime<br /><br />Much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-54415846125885965792015-06-22T20:45:18.743+08:002015-06-22T20:45:18.743+08:00A very well written response to Dickinson's po...A very well written response to Dickinson's poem. Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-27875470363640290002015-06-22T17:44:33.977+08:002015-06-22T17:44:33.977+08:00One sometimes react immediately when alone. There ...One sometimes react immediately when alone. There appears to be that feeling of getting cornered. Well penned Kelvin!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-74948562405004585412015-06-22T06:18:20.054+08:002015-06-22T06:18:20.054+08:00That last line is so uniquely stunning!That last line is so uniquely stunning!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-75708623060052725992015-06-22T05:50:05.462+08:002015-06-22T05:50:05.462+08:00I couldn't agree more that those opening lines...I couldn't agree more that those opening lines are so powerful....bam! Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-5374110058446675652015-06-22T05:31:25.199+08:002015-06-22T05:31:25.199+08:00How hard to imagine, those eyes staring, waiting a...How hard to imagine, those eyes staring, waiting and the possibility--if heaven is not accessible--of ending in hell.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-76905138676329527492015-06-22T02:41:11.353+08:002015-06-22T02:41:11.353+08:00I too love the first two lines. But the ending is...I too love the first two lines. But the ending is superb!Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-82348760784776237902015-06-21T23:54:56.237+08:002015-06-21T23:54:56.237+08:00Your writing, as always, astounds with its power a...Your writing, as always, astounds with its power and purity of pitch. The opening two lines are simply brilliant.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-42415211865296529422015-06-21T23:48:33.341+08:002015-06-21T23:48:33.341+08:00nice tribute to dickinsonnice tribute to dickinsonSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-69500112535119670412015-06-21T22:11:52.036+08:002015-06-21T22:11:52.036+08:00I fail to see heaven, but witness hell...strong li...I fail to see heaven, but witness hell...strong lines, I guess the answers are found in between the folds of each. written as only you can my friend..you have a strong voice..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-17779791305962607692015-06-21T20:58:12.939+08:002015-06-21T20:58:12.939+08:00Interesting contrast you set between the two, or t...Interesting contrast you set between the two, or the assumed contrast between heaven and hell. Life is a bit of both at times. And sometimes we are stretched between.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-62852839655948833252015-06-21T20:47:54.044+08:002015-06-21T20:47:54.044+08:00wow...you've turned the 'heaves' into ...wow...you've turned the 'heaves' into heaven then buzzed like a fly and ended the poem with hell...a brilliant found poem Kelvin...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-17909618960047608662015-06-21T19:45:50.775+08:002015-06-21T19:45:50.775+08:00To me this poem shows both sadness and torment. H...To me this poem shows both sadness and torment. How alone one must feel if one cannot see the Heavens, & the fly image is intense & unique - and how painful to have one's breath dried to hell. Rich, but chilling, imagery.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-42823583631510895412015-06-21T19:43:28.884+08:002015-06-21T19:43:28.884+08:00Oh Kelvin, this brings back the comment you left a...Oh Kelvin, this brings back the comment you left at my poem a few weeks ago, knowing so intensely that buzz takes gives a special meaning,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-81890423400327196152015-06-21T19:40:54.541+08:002015-06-21T19:40:54.541+08:00I admire the leap from heaven to hell...each line ...I admire the leap from heaven to hell...each line is sharp, specially the ending line ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-83030300471125683362015-06-21T19:33:17.631+08:002015-06-21T19:33:17.631+08:00The first two lines resonated with me Kelvin... so...The first two lines resonated with me Kelvin... so well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-61225693409303519902015-06-21T19:27:42.077+08:002015-06-21T19:27:42.077+08:00A fabulous sense of dimensionless nothing. Inspir...A fabulous sense of dimensionless nothing. Inspirational work.Peter Coddlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17447089709470681036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-38071229352715105982015-06-21T18:52:34.280+08:002015-06-21T18:52:34.280+08:00The consciousness of death. A feeling that could b...The consciousness of death. A feeling that could both terrify and placate you.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-62490023279204331432015-06-21T18:48:36.498+08:002015-06-21T18:48:36.498+08:00This is absolutely stunning! Loved the last line.....This is absolutely stunning! Loved the last line.. such a powerful ending :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-7044020079922584532015-06-21T17:25:40.770+08:002015-06-21T17:25:40.770+08:00wow! amazing opening lines and ending!wow! amazing opening lines and ending!my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-82488367122960207972015-06-21T16:57:58.163+08:002015-06-21T16:57:58.163+08:00At once delicate and concrete - a real contemplati...At once delicate and concrete - a real contemplation of life, discomfort and beyond - also thank you for your thoughtful comment Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-43965882916690975592015-06-21T16:22:37.454+08:002015-06-21T16:22:37.454+08:00Killer closing line! Much more creative than &quo...Killer closing line! Much more creative than "last breath," "breathe my last," etc.Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09986613079198776840noreply@blogger.com