tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post4403820475425984475..comments2023-06-03T20:02:33.230+08:00Comments on Just Bystanding: Dead Starkelvin s.m.http://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-13974383751430048582015-03-25T20:28:33.176+08:002015-03-25T20:28:33.176+08:00The feeling the old silver screen stars must have ...The feeling the old silver screen stars must have known at the end.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-64223119472306112912015-03-24T20:38:00.183+08:002015-03-24T20:38:00.183+08:00Hello Kelvin,
Thanks for your lovely comment on m...Hello Kelvin,<br /><br />Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem. Lol dont worry I never let my fellow poet's comment go to spam! :D<br /><br />CiaoSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-40052075383390133072015-03-24T20:17:50.587+08:002015-03-24T20:17:50.587+08:00This has a mythological feel to it but is also ver...This has a mythological feel to it but is also very haunting. Beautifully written.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-83857965077335955222015-03-24T08:24:14.816+08:002015-03-24T08:24:14.816+08:00Kelvin,
I feel that I am observing a wall paintin...Kelvin,<br /><br />I feel that I am observing a wall painting, but brought to life with movement and grace, through your poetic description..Superb!<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-87219120900313383112015-03-24T04:43:31.344+08:002015-03-24T04:43:31.344+08:00oh my the imagery is so hauntingoh my the imagery is so hauntingSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-59800824765470431092015-03-23T23:06:04.725+08:002015-03-23T23:06:04.725+08:00Lovely write Kelvin. I haven't read your insp...Lovely write Kelvin. I haven't read your inspiration, but it gave rise to something very beautiful, sad, that makes one reflect. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-28021465722523073852015-03-23T22:39:03.102+08:002015-03-23T22:39:03.102+08:00'adorned with promises
of city fame you are st...'adorned with promises<br />of city fame you are staged<br />atop a chiffonier, half lit'<br /><br />A fading star, out of the limelight, almost invisible, but still there, aching to be seen.<br /><br />Mysteriously intriguing.<br /><br />PoppyPoppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08980323586402386609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-88564086305701270042015-03-23T08:06:31.884+08:002015-03-23T08:06:31.884+08:00"Carrier of secret songs", but who will ..."Carrier of secret songs", but who will hear them now?<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-30613521738900656262015-03-23T05:25:32.934+08:002015-03-23T05:25:32.934+08:00Hello Kelvin,
This is extraordinary work! Inspire...Hello Kelvin,<br /><br />This is extraordinary work! Inspired! :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-45952467999217674062015-03-23T05:15:48.417+08:002015-03-23T05:15:48.417+08:00Well done! A wonderful gem.
ZQWell done! A wonderful gem.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-65451606041293710452015-03-23T05:10:48.345+08:002015-03-23T05:10:48.345+08:00I like the images in this as well as the sense of ...I like the images in this as well as the sense of mystery. Great mix.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-62640184264973989712015-03-23T03:30:23.919+08:002015-03-23T03:30:23.919+08:00Wonderful images of the end of a star as you start...Wonderful images of the end of a star as you start us off with diva and mix the images throughout.Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-12145705596805001852015-03-23T02:54:19.429+08:002015-03-23T02:54:19.429+08:00the last stanza is really good
Evaporate until y...the last stanza is really good<br /><br /><br /><a href="https://zongrik.wordpress.com/2015/03/19/evaporate-until-you-lenticulate/" rel="nofollow">Evaporate until you Lenticulate</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-50376049306919889762015-03-23T02:46:13.139+08:002015-03-23T02:46:13.139+08:00Adorned with promises of city fame... So many are ...Adorned with promises of city fame... So many are promised and have desires but few are fulfilled. Good write!ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-90415436026368964092015-03-23T00:38:43.432+08:002015-03-23T00:38:43.432+08:00How I love "carrier of secret songs....to the...How I love "carrier of secret songs....to the daybreak"!! Beautiful. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-62144074008658520982015-03-23T00:00:57.298+08:002015-03-23T00:00:57.298+08:00Nice imagery, Kelvin! I also like the "carrie...Nice imagery, Kelvin! I also like the "carrier of secret songs". Very intriguing :)Toriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10570179609915990220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-68185587761803822802015-03-22T23:28:02.216+08:002015-03-22T23:28:02.216+08:00very evocative poem Kelvin...btw, i've seen su...very evocative poem Kelvin...btw, i've seen such dead stars as home decor piece :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-72109521266178839792015-03-22T22:23:26.976+08:002015-03-22T22:23:26.976+08:00I like so much how you tie it all together with th...I like so much how you tie it all together with that single line of a dead star.. Somehow it's like strands coming together and you see a cobweb shimmering,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-44845482624551299112015-03-22T20:58:43.417+08:002015-03-22T20:58:43.417+08:00I can see this as a starlet in the world of image ...I can see this as a starlet in the world of image and film and more globally as delicate celestial being.. star filled writeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-70911260121607146712015-03-22T20:34:23.973+08:002015-03-22T20:34:23.973+08:00What a lovely gift for the midday gods ~ Each lin...What a lovely gift for the midday gods ~ Each line is exquisite to read Kelvin ~ Happy weekend ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-91164274302988264002015-03-22T20:01:52.575+08:002015-03-22T20:01:52.575+08:00Absolutely beautiful piece - it gracefully dances ...Absolutely beautiful piece - it gracefully dances across the page - I see ballet - Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-17396845672448395372015-03-22T20:00:07.122+08:002015-03-22T20:00:07.122+08:00Wonderful poem, Kelvin. I like the 'carrier o...Wonderful poem, Kelvin. I like the 'carrier of secret songs.' Sounds alluring but also a bit mysterious. And those promises of 'city fame,' I wonder if they really happen. Hope they will not turn into empty promises instead!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-73051722249015162712015-03-22T19:52:43.611+08:002015-03-22T19:52:43.611+08:00Wonderful, evocative words, as always - creating b...Wonderful, evocative words, as always - creating both picture and feeling.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4297700604891757697.post-60012520138226507122015-03-22T19:37:38.902+08:002015-03-22T19:37:38.902+08:00once you are done, you are often displayed to the ...once you are done, you are often displayed to the next generations especially if you have been considered as an important part of history. totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.com